If I cut the epilogue, my word count is 148,292.
If I were to do some book-wide deletions, among areas to consider are:
- all email (Libby/lawyers ...)
- fugue ... no I think the sensual/physical companionship is important
- all excerpts from books (Damasio ...)
- dramatic cuts redundancy and chit chat from letters
- Sadoff visit
- long letters on the Dad's and on anger
- Lucent stuff ... Craig said interesting
- rework the "long" stuff ... when I read it it feels like a slog even to me
- Houston Law Review article
- bail argument
- Munchhausen
Here is one argument for self-publishing. I can make a Director's cut. I can rage war on my manuscript to submit it to contests, and then add content back in. It won't be a complete waste of time. I'm sure that forcing myself to 70 pages would yield some very good ideas.
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